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:rose: "Lady in red" :rose:

Critiques are welcome in this photograph :heart:


Edit: changed colours less yellow, suggested by =Isvarmt



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Critiques


:icongetcarter:
Sarah Jane presents herself!

And she does that with an extraordinary accuracy describing her being with this shot.

Not that I ever had the chance to meet Sarah in person - but from what I kown receiving her insighted comments she must be just like you she her here. A Charming, loving and light-hearted person - you can read that in her eyes and smile.

She is choosing a Little-Red-Riding-Hood-theme; the redish tones are a perfect complementary contrast to the fresh and juicy gras she beds herself in.
The composition is also well chosen as she has a diagonal position.
I actually can only think one thing I would have changed - I would be ciurrous to see this shot in a greater display window showing your right elbow.

Thank you for sharing this shot with us, Sarah! :heart:
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I love everything about this; Sarah. Your expression, the marked features in your face - the red against the green. The composition is great, and the relaxing vibes coming from this photograph makes me want to lay down in the green grass myself! The only thing I would want to do differently, would be to remove the yellow in your skin and just keep it as light as possible to give a bigger contrast against the warm dress and the light grass. Stunning photography, Sarah! I can't wait to see more of this - and I hope my 'critique' was useful, or helped you in any way.
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:iconreydelbolero:
Beautiful! The model and the shot itself. Amazing colors.

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Treat people as if they were what they ought to be and you help them to become what they are capable of being. Goethe
:iconhereshestands:
You are so beautiful Sarah. Lovely. :heart:

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♥ I can stop and catch my breath and look no further for happiness. And I will not turn again cos my heart has found its home.♥
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wow awesome colors :)

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Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man ? - Tao
:iconautumnyuna:
Such a contrast between the red and her blue eyes :D
:icontmpst24myst:
You've always reminded me of a perfect porcelain doll. I haven't a critique, I'm not well with that lately. Honestly though, if noticed something, I would let you know.. as for now - :heart:

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The desire for solitude comes with a loneliness only an artist could understand. - Dae.
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There's a certain lightness, airiness to this piece, that is very refreshing. Reminds me of the song "Feeling Groovey"
Give it a listen [link]

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:iconlove4art:
Hey Chris, I hope I don't come across as rude here because I'm not; but I have no idea what a smiley emote means in terms of critiquing or commenting on my photo. If you wouldn't mind, I'd prefer a critique like I left you, or at least a tiny comment, just some honesty, not praise. :) thanks

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Real integrity is doing the right thing, knowing that nobody's going to know whether you did it or not.
:iconlove4art:
That is so sweet Dae! Wow! :hug: thank you very much. I wish I could take more photos of other people but I have no other models but my sister, and she's moved out :S

thanks again :cuddle:

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:iconlove4art:
awwwww :cuddle: love ya Bec!

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Real integrity is doing the right thing, knowing that nobody's going to know whether you did it or not.

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